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Nilesy stood in his pool shop waiting for customers when he saw an email on his new computer, he looked at it sat down opened the email and read it he was shocked when he read what it it said the email was as follow:
hey nilesy can you come over to honeydew inc quickly? Lalna fell all the way from the penthouse to the bottom without his flying ring right when he said about making a pool hes in bad shape and we are looking after him but really want a pool can you build us one thanks
lewis D:

'Oh no poor Lalna' Nilesy thought he then stood up closed up shop and headed for Honeydew inc.
When Nilesy arrived it was very quiet and for a while he wondered why then relized that everyone would be inside helping Lalna. Nilesy headed into the tall building and was immediatly knocked over by Honeydew ruching past as fast as he could with a bowl of soup.
"Ah Nilesy your here thank god!" Lewis said helping Nilesy to his feet"we can pay for the pool so don't worry we have eveything under control in here can you build it next to the to do list please"
"Sure"Nilesy answered and as he left to build the pool he heard Lalna shout
"WHAT THE BLOODY HELL DID YOU BRING ME SOUP FOR I DON'T HAVE A COLD YOU DOLT I FELL!"

Niley was glad he wasn't in Honeydew's shoes right now as he dug the hole for the pool he then realised he didn't know what they wanted him to make it out of so he went back into the factory narrowly missing having his head blown off by a laser blast from Lalna.
Nilesy walked over to Lewis and asked
"What material should I use for the pool?
"YOU STUPID DWARVEN MAN I'LL KILL YOU ...STAND STILL YAH BUGGER SO I CAN GET YOU!"Lalna yelled
"Sorry what did you say Nilesy?"Lewis answered
"I said what do you want me tomake the pool out of?"Nilesy replied

"COME HERE YOU MIDGET I'LL RIP YOUR HEAD OFF WITH MY BARE HANDS!"Lalna screamed
"Oh right uhhhh...perhaps you could use stone wafers?"Lewis said back
"Okay" Nilesy said and then he went off to build the pool.
1st part of my Nilesy fanfic hope you like it
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:iconmangaminecraft:
MangaMinecraft Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Well then. Looks like all hell decided to break loose....
Nice start to the story though :)
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causeisaidso123 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
well all hell has to break loose sometime doesn't it? :D
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MangaMinecraft Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Yes, yes it does :D
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causeisaidso123 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
i thought that after Lalna fell would be the perfect time so you ended up with this (im watching you now that sounds creepy does it not?)
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MangaMinecraft Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Well that would make some sense since he IS in quite a bit of pain. (And yes that did sound a little creepy.)
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causeisaidso123 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
there is a lesson te be learnt here unless thy have a cold don't bring soup
(i know right i meant the DA thing were i can see what your doing that sounds wrong/weird/creepy <--take your pick)
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MangaMinecraft Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Exactly. (I don't necesarily find it creepy or weird. Don't really worry about it.)
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causeisaidso123 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
bring some bandages or ask them what they want (you understand what i mean then?)
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rebma97 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Oh dear. Pissed off Lalna is pissed off. This is gonna be a fun fanfic. :3

How the Hell am I supposed to calm Lalna down now?! I just managed to calm him down from when Ruffleruff broke all of his test tubes... :iconcryingplz:
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causeisaidso123 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
oh dont worry he will get better in later chapters(hopefully i may keep him angry for a bit longer as a comedy impliment but you never know)
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rebma97 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
*sighs* I'm not worrying about him healing... He does that pretty quickly on his own... It the calming down part that's gonna be impossible for me to do.
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causeisaidso123 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
im sure i will think of something(or not oh god what if i cant think of something what have i done?)
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rebma97 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
You don't have to do it... Lucky you... I have to. It's my job as his guardian... If you want an explanation, there's a fanfic in my gallery... that and I like to roleplay. :shrug:
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causeisaidso123 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
nice i like to roleplay too and being Lalna's gaurdian must be tough whats it like?
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rebma97 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I'm half-demoness, so he has no clue that I actually exist. I'm the reason his castle hasn't been blown into a million little pieces yet, and the reason that he isn't dead yet.

I was summoned by his parents when Lalna was a tyke of three years, and I was given the order and task of caring for him. I was never released from this charge, so I continue to protect him today. Being a demoness of the Twilight Forest instead of the Nether, I'm a lot kinder. Remember those mushrooms that grew in his castle... my essence caused that. I keep his machines in relatively good condition, and I keep them from exploding. Whenever something goes missing from his supplies or new stuff appears, that's my doing. I also keep Rythian off his tail... He;s so difficult to keep out of trouble!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *flips a table*
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causeisaidso123 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
well he is Lalna and that sound like an interesting story i was born from a lemon plant (wich is wierd cause i look human) and well i likee to go on adventures
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Lackyducks Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
Lalna doesn't sound very ill with what he's screaming XD Somebody take the laser off him, wow.
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causeisaidso123 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
he has a few broken bones cause he fell hes not ill as such just hurt and simon isnt helping
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SigmaSkylord Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student General Artist
Why is Lalna so angry?
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:iconcauseisaidso123:
causeisaidso123 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
Cause Simon was being an idiot and Lalna had fallen from the penthouse to the bottom floor
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SigmaSkylord Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student General Artist
Ow. But Simon's always an idiot.
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causeisaidso123 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
yeh but falling doesnt help
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SigmaSkylord Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student General Artist
Yeah. But why did he unequip his ring? That's usually Xephos
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causeisaidso123 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
an accident i plan to explain everything about the fall in the next part
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SigmaSkylord Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student General Artist
I look forward to it.
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SigmaSkylord Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student General Artist
I look forward to it.
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SigmaSkylord Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student General Artist
I look forward to it.
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causeisaidso123 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
i look forward to writing it
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iznj Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That was fast
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causeisaidso123 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
i was writing it and answering messages at the same time plus if i have an idea i can put it down pretty quickly
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iznj Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ha Ha
Yeah
I do that too
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causeisaidso123 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
i will probably get the second part up tomorrow to be honest i need to think about how the story should proceed what did you think of my second attempt at fanfiction? :la:
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iznj Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I like it
Thanks for the watch
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causeisaidso123 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
thanks and i watch those that i like so you know
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iznj Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yay I'm liked
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causeisaidso123 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
am i liked?
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